Pitch: https://youtu.be/xruQJdoaCHM
Reflection and Changes:
For the most part, the feedback I received was positive on my last pitch. However, there was one suggestion to place the camera at eye level so I could into the camera more easily. As a result of this feedback, I did indeed lower my camera and tried to improve my eye contact with it. As far as the actual content of my pitch, I did not change much.
Hi Veronica, Great job on your pitch! I have been fond of your idea from the beginning as robocalls is one of my biggest pet-peeves. It is clear that your pitch has improved throughout your three pitches, and I am interested to see how your app progresses. It is definitely something i would use. The only thing I have to say is remember to highlight your link and make it a hyperlink so we can click it! I was able to see it by copy pasting, but the hyperlink is easier!
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